Friday Fictioneers: Repeat it • #flashfiction #shortreads #100words

PHOTO PROMPT © The Reclining Gentleman

PHOTO PROMPT © The Reclining Gentleman

Repeat it

If I repeat it, I will start to believe it. If I repeat it, I will start to believe it. If I repeat it, I will start to believe it. If I repeat it, I will start to believe it. If I repeat it, I will start to believe it.
Yellow. Yellow. Yellow. Yellow. Yellow.
Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right.
Stand here. Count to five.
One.
Two.
Three.
Four.
Five.
I am not my thoughts. I am not my thoughts. I am not my thoughts. I am not my thoughts. I am not my thoughts.

Word count: 100 words
This flash fiction piece is in response to Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.
Advertisements

25 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Repeat it • #flashfiction #shortreads #100words

    • Thanks. The fact that it’s a bridge is irrelevant, but if it makes you connect more to the story then I’m happy. This character is too much in their head to realize what’s going on on the outside.

      Liked by 1 person

    • I didn’t approach this from a diagnostic point of view, but you’re probably right. I think many of us have repetitive thoughts in times of stress. Maybe not like this though.

      Like

Share your thoughts and comments.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s